My tutor Lizzy Levy has given me permission to put her feedback to my Introductory assignment on here.
It is difficult to know if I have done enough to fulfil the criteria and this is what this introductory assignment is about for me. I have not studied at this level before so whilst I have used the skills that I already have, I know that I will need to improve and gain more skills and experience along the way through research, visiting exhibitions, viewing other peoples work, guidance from my tutor and progressing through the course itself. I know that I will need to experiment more and move out of my comfort zone, broaden my horizons, which I will do as I learn. I am already learning new skills, analytical writing and reflection are not things that I do normally, I have set up my blog and I’m looking forward to starting the next project.
After reading through the Introductory Assignment and giving some thought to the 4 themes I selected Natures Larder as I thought this would give me a wide range of ideas and I enjoy nature. Whilst the other themes were all very different they did not appeal to me as much as Natures Larder because they were not so familiar to me and I may not have been able to source items to fulfil the brief as easily.
Mind-mapping produced lots of ideas and during the process I could not get away from the idea of protection – nature provides protection for itself but humanity relies on nature to provide that protection. It was important for me to show this idea in the selected objects and fabrics and that I could obtain them fairly easily.
Gathering the items gave me a chance to use some things that I had at home and some which I collected from the beach nearby. Grouping the items together and trying out different coloured backgrounds was made easier because they were of a similar size. Taking photos of the arrangements and background colours meant that I could look back and decide which showed the colour and mood the best.
Although we were not required to produce accurate sketches, I have tried to do this for my own benefit and used it as a starting point as I have not sketched or drawn really since leaving school. It is not something I find easy and have in the past avoided it by using images from the internet and a photocopier, so it has been an interesting experience and an area that I know I will need to gain confidence in. Using charcoal, pastels, crayons and ink created a different feel to my sketches and I need to develop this area as well.
In the future I would like to be able to sketch more loosely and confidently, spending more time experimenting and being less constrained by my own lack of confidence. I also need to spend more time each day working on my assignment as it has taken me longer to complete than I first thought. I have enjoyed using my blog and find this easier than a paper version, uploading photos directly and writing about my experiences although I do have to be disciplined using it.
Developing my work will be a continual and gradual process and one of the reasons for doing this course, it is the start of my journey and at present I don’t know where it will lead.
This is a photo that I took whilst I was out walking Bella, it reminds me of the layers of the oyster shell that I selected as one of my items for the Introductory assignment.
These sand patterns look like the textures on the piece of bark in my collection.
Tyre tracks on the sand – interesting textures
Her drawings are simple line drawings but within the lines there is an angst. There are images of a large spider with a human face, images of a sexual nature, childbirth and conception. Her work is dramatic even though it consists of lines and shapes and shows that drawings don’t have to be detailed to have impact and show feelings.
Alison uses sound to create an images. She uses speech recordings which allows the listener to interpret her words into their own image. She uses something that we would not normally consider as a tool to create an image.
Katie’s drawings look like they are worked in charcoal or pastel as they are soft and smudged. There is a lot of variation in tone, really dark black areas to just a hint of shading. She uses lines and shading with lovely effect, there is no detail but still there is perspective and
I love her paintings. They are colourful, modern and varied. It is smudgy, simple, no detail just lots of colour and impact.
I also love the fact that she wears overalls while she works! Very inspiring work.
http://www.katiesollohub and I follow her on facebook and instagram
Roanna uses brush marks to create her images. They are regular marks with tonal changes, sometimes lighter or darker than the next one, complete brush marks or parts. They look like painted fingernails to me, maybe not what she had intended!
Her stitching is monochrome and is straight stitching build up to create an image. Some of her images remind me of dust blown across paper or a childhood toy where you used a magnet to move iron filings to put hair on faces! Only someone who grew up in the ’60’s would remember that!
I like her stitching, this type of stitching has become popular recently.
Outline shapes, bold colours. This is not art that I understand or can relate to. It does illustrate that although I don’t particularly like or understand it, to other people it is great art and they resonate with it. Not everyone will like or understand my creative output but that doesn’t matter.
Debbie’s work is a modern version of something else I did as a child. Creating patterns around pins stuck into a piece of polystyrene or plywood. Her images have a ghostly, wispy quality and range from familiar objects to landscapes. They are effective and clever. They remind me of when my sewing machine bobbin loses its tension and produces a tangle of threads underneath my fabric.
Hilary is a mixed media artist, her work is mostly small marks repeated lots of times to build up an image. She describes her work as “an obsessive preoccupation with repetition” and “an attempt to impose order on chaos”.
I really like her work and it illustrates how mark making in whatever medium you choose can have a powerful result.
http:///www.hilaryellis.co.uk and I follow her on instagram
He produces grid drawings, a series of lines meeting a dots producing a mesh like image. The grid is not regular but has areas of varying intensity of marks which appears to make the paper undulate. Other pieces of his work are asymmetrical so the design looks like a mirror image.
Today I have searched though my stash of papers to select a range for the next part of the assignment. I have always kept interesting papers and card from wrappings and I also make my own paper and I have selected some of this to work on. I also like tissue paper scrunched up and glued to a paper backing to work on as this gives such lovely surfaces.
I have looked out black and white crayons, pastels and oil pastels along with a few different pencils, a fine line pen and ink. I have dabbled with some of these mediums in the past but now I really have to get down to business!
I have started off by using ink with a small brush on brown packaging paper which is slightly absorbent and making simple marks of varying sizes to show the flow and patterns on a small area of the tree bark. Black paper with white crayon and produces an interesting effect, a negative image of the surface of the tree bark.
I had a piece of silver foil from a piece of chocolate (already consumed!) which gave me the idea to take a rubbing of the linen fabric and the oyster shell combined as I was interested to see what this would look like. I then did the same with a piece of handmade paper which is softer than normal paper and a black crayon and the effect was quite different. I like the radiating lines from the shell which are quite clear against the regular lines of the fabric.
A combination of radiating lines from the oyster shell drawings and outline of the honesty seed heads in black ink pen and a soft pencil which has been smudged and an eraser used to create shadow, drawn on handmade paper. Crumpled tissue paper stuck to normal paper creates a lovely surface, one of my favourites. Honesty seed head shapes drawing with a soft drawing pencil and charcoal produce a delicate image.
Simple spiral patterns taken from my stone drawings, drawn randomly with black crayon on white drawing paper, some outlines are smudged to produce a softer outline. I am trying to show stones being rolled on the beach by the sea. Quickly drawn in white crayon on white drawing paper then with a large brush I have washed diluted black in (which looks blue now) over randomly.
Lines taken from the feather drawings in black crayon trying not to flow the same way produces an interesting pattern. Black ink wash applied with a big brush very lightly on handmade paper which is very absorbent, the different intensities in the lines formed are due to different areas of the brush picking up different amounts of ink. Inspiration taken from the feather drawings in my sketchbook.
The oyster shell is made up of many layers. Do they indicate how old the oyster was? They are like the dating rings of a tree. The layers are irregular and frilly, does this indicate good and bad years in the life of an oyster? I have tried to achieve this effect with black ink brushed onto brown packaging paper with a brush.
Whelk egg cases are hard to draw, I have tried to capture the round ball that the egg cases form. They are a sponge ball make up of hundreds of different cells. I have seen hundreds of them on the beach in Deal this week where we have been on holiday. Bella my dog loves to play with them and sometimes she eats them. I suppose they must be a form of protein.
I have used corrugated card with a marker pen to show the lines and layers of the oyster shell. I wanted a surface that would give an impression of the layers of the shell.
A collection of some the marks I have discovered for this assignment creating a larger image.
This has been an interesting experience and one I need to develop in a looser and more confident way.
I haven’t drawn for years, not really since my school days which was too many years ago! I have deliberately avoided it and used a photocopier to enlarge or reduce images. My drawing skills are basic so this stage will be interesting.
I have started by sketching the items individually in my sketchbook with a few different types of pencil as a starting point. I am not confident in my drawing skills but hopefully I will get better with practice.
I have found this exercise quite enjoyable although some of the items I have chosen are not easy to draw and I realise I should do a lot more drawing but time is always in short supply. I have moved on from sketching the object as it is, to trying to interpret the shape and texture of each item. Some have more to offer than others but that is all part of the experience and I will learn from it.
I have had to purchase a magnifying glass to look at each one in detail and I have had to wear my glasses more often than I would normally, you suddenly realise that you can’t see as well as you used to but you don’t realise it!
The linen fabric has a very loose weave and can be pulled into different shapes. It is flexible but does not drape as it is quite stiff. It frays very easily and the individual threads are irregular in shape.
I have tried to show how the shell is made up in layers which undulate and radiate out. Barnacles have in the past made their home on the shell but all that is left now are eye like structures huddled together.
The tree bark has a scaly surface, there are splits, fissures and cuts in the surface, layers and scars of growth built up over its life time.
A random pattern of my interpretation of the pebble and its markings. It has spent years being thrown around on the beach by the sea or huddled together with its stone beach mates, producing a round smooth stone.